Her waist is really, really flat in this picture. I really like everythig else, but her torso looks very unnatural. Perhaps if you made it thicker (not expanding the sides) it would look a bit more natural c:
I noticed in the tutorial the line work was there when it started, when zoomed in the lines looked very rough like pencil but I guess it could be a brush. Was this scanned for the lines or did you draw it in the program? Do you sometimes draw out pictures on paper before coloring it? I love your work and the two videos you have are incredible.
Yay~ I've been waiting for a new picture from you ^^ I really, really like it. I actually saw the video for this first on youtube by coincidence and had a small freakout moment xD Im glad to find the picture here. It's really cute~